Wanted: Honest feedback on my open source project website
My co-founder and I recently launched our open-source project with this website (https://stof.dev) Would love feedback on the overall messaging - do you understand what we're doing, why you should care as a developer/someone working with data, and why its important. Hopefully our CTAs are clear enough - our goal is to get devs to contribute to the project and join our community. Thanks in advance! :)
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Its clear enough for me to know i am not your target demographic.
turn the what is stof section into bullet points. Try not to have more than two line of words over each other.
add testimonials, people care about social proof before anything else. Particularly if that proof has clout or status.
Show case studies of people using it and then what life is like before your product was here.
or mention competitors. i am not knowledgeable about code or databases but this is the stuff i would look for, to better understand what your selling.
Lastly i would specify who your target audience is.
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