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Need Some Product Feedback!

Hey Indie Hackers,

I just built the landing page for a new platform/service I am going to be launching soon.

I would love some feedback on concept and landing page layout/design only. There is no functionality at this point.

You can use the following link to both view and provide feedback on page. I threw a landing page together in Wix: https://sh.yoursitereview.com/TcB8BL8

Let me know if you have any questions. Please let me know if you also understand the concept as a whole.

on November 1, 2019
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    I like the idea; the page could use a lot of work.

    Think about who your main clientele is going to be.

    • What are they looking for?
    • How are you going to appeal to them?
    • What outcome are they looking for?
    • What's the next action you want them to take?
    • What's stopping them from taking the next action?

    If you answer these questions, it'll help you with your content & copy

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    "Trained Marketing Professional Found Here."
    Save time and hire without the hassle

    This doesn't solve a problem for me. You're only appealing to people who are looking for trained marketing professionals; but what if I don't know that's what I need?

    If I am your customer, what do I want? What is the point of marketing?

    What does the inspector do?

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    Apply as an inspector should be somewhere else on the page, away from the main CTA.

    Your main CTA could be something like:

    "Get your curated list of marketing partners in minutes"
    "TRY IT FREE".

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    The process section is also not helpful.

    "Seamlessly submit your project details."
    Save your time and ditch the traditional job posting methods. Quickly submit project
    details.

    Seamless is a table stake.

    Focus on what is wrong with traditional job posting methods and the benefit you provide.

    "Easy Job Postings"
    "Post your job in 5 minutes, not hours"

    "Connect with your marketing inspector."
    Allow our technology to connect you with a curated list of marketing inspectors tailored
    toward your project.

    "Get the perfect match"
    "We connect you with a curated list of marketing pros tailored to your needs. "

    The third feature is not really part of the process.
    You could have a money back guarantee later to provide some more incentive. But in this section you should focus on the outcomes/benefits that your users will get.

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    "The best businesses deserve the best team
    Our marketing inspectors are trained so you don't have to"

    "The best businesses need the best team" or "Get the best team without the price tag"
    "Our marketing professionals provide the expertise you need, at a fraction of the cost you'd normally pay."

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    Add testimonials.
    Add pricing.
    Add examples of the service provided, and the results users could expect.
    Add real examples of the marketing pros you would be connecting them with.

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      Extremely helpful feedback! Thank you for this.

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      I appreciate that! Thank you for the feedback.