Hi all, would love your feedback on my CBC course landing page. I offer a course on how to build your side-hustle in 3 weeks. I'm getting a lot of traffic but very low conversion ~1%
Kindly help in how I can improve:
https://www.curiorevelio.com/byp-workshop
The first thing I can tell when I land on your page from my phone: I have to scroll (just a bit, but still) to get to the first CTA. I think you should have one right in your banner.
Then, I agree with what @hatkyinc said about the titles: they are too generic. I would either change them into a short sentence emulating the idea you're giving in the paragraph, or add it to the FAQ to make the page shorter.
Lastly, the design of the page might be a bit boring. Keeping it simple is very good, but white and light grey might be too neutral, not fun enough to make people want to stay too long on your page and find out more.
The LP has so many titles, and all of them are fairly generic, not telling me what it is
(by reading order)
So I read like a paragraph worth full of titles and still IDK what this is really...
So is the most important thing I want to spend 3 weeks doing something or is this comparatively quicker? more in-depth? why is this the most important part?
What am I exercising? is it to CNC cut a square? 3d print a cube? sketch a design on graph paper with a pencil?
So your ideas are worth what to me?
Are you making it for me?
Thanks
I'm just giving you the 3sec impression / first read pass
Like I got little that I understand in regards to what's on offer
That first pass read should be much better to get conversions
It could be that you have just tried to stay super generic to be broad in appeal but the copy is too generic to be attractive at the moment
You need to find what people actually want for this niche and answer that early
"Fitment Call" tells me your probably 3d printing centric, but other than that no place mentions what the focus is on... maybe now after having several minute I get that for me "BUILD YOUR PASSION WORKSHOP" initially read as like physically build a workshop, like know which equipment to get and how to set it up and such, but it's more like "BUILD YOUR PASSION - WORKSHOP" vs "BUILD YOUR WORKSHOP" (that your passionate about)
The part where you split to weeks, due badly designed, the 1:1 session is probably significant for people
Do you think of making most of your money on the workshop or filament supplies? cause it seems you allocate equal weight to them (CTA wise)
I'm curious as to what are typical convertion rates for a like this?