I recently put up a landing page at https://www.lokalcreatives.tech . My startup is working on two products, a social app aimed at a creative niche and digital media services for independent creatives.
Looking to see if the website makes you interested in our work, and what your idea is of what we do.
Honestly, the layout makes me feel like the content is all over the place i.e there is no symmetry. I agree with the other posters in showing your work up front as that is your value proposition. The graphic is nice but doesn't convey meaning.
I'll focus on the design of the landing page because I think @shawnjavadi has covered the problem with the content.
I hope this helps. Happy to take a look again once the changes are incorporated.
There's nothing in the above fold content that tells me what your company (?) does. I'd suggest moving your value prop to the top
Thanks for the feedback, I see what you mean.
If I were you I would create a separate landing page for the app. That way you can focus on just highlighting the value of your agency on the home page.
I'll talk to my Co-founder about this, we want to redesign and add more content while we prep for an alpha test in a few weeks.